Street Hawk Diostory Production Delays

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Street Hawk Diostory Production Delays

Post by pentastar » Fri Feb 09, 2007 9:08 pm

Hello Everyone,

I know its been awhile since I posted Chapter 7 of my Street Hawk diostory, I just wanted to provide an explanation (a.k.a. excuse :-[ ) for the delay.

My wife and I decided it is time for us to seriously consider buying our first home. So the work and research that is required for such an endeavor has taken up most of my free time. And as much as I love working on my diostories, I'm afraid they don't take priority over providing a home and shelter for my family.

I am by no means giving up on this project, I'm just progressing a lot slower than I'd like to right now. Hopefully in the next couple weeks I can find time to get Chapter 8 completed.

In the meantime, I hope you all will forgive me and be patient for future chapters.

On a side note, do any of you know of any references in the show to Jesse's family? There aren't any that I can recall. I just want to make sure that I keep in step with the show as much as possible.

Thanks for all your positive feedback on my little project.

hernesson

Street Hawk Diostory Production Delays

Post by hernesson » Sat Feb 10, 2007 4:34 am

Scott. You don't need to apologise for having a life outside Streethawkonline. Okay, we know most of us don't! LoL
First time buying can be a pretty stressful business and its something one needs to consider very carefully. I got on the property ladder 1 year ago, but are fortunate enough to own my own property.

No, I can 99 percent be sure that Jesse's family was never illuded to in the show. You are free to make up whatever you want. I think I may have asked the question awhile ago infact - what would Jesse's mum and dad be like? Does he have a brother out there? Maybe the two brothers can be estranged? Whilst Jesse was a reckless teen who took a good path in life and decided to become a cop, maybe the brother went down the wrong avenue and there could be a story where he pursues a crook and is shocked to find it is his brother?



hernesson

Street Hawk Diostory Production Delays

Post by hernesson » Sat Feb 10, 2007 6:03 am

Time for my apologies now. ;-) I'm sorry my contribution of the fanfic has fallen off considerably since first setting the ball rolling. Just plain laziness I'm afraid, but I guess there's also an element of wanting to control the elements of my own story.
Fortunately, it seems we all are pretty much of the same wavelengths here about what avenues to explore, so it makes it much easier on a collaborative effort when you're not all working against each other. It's still hard though, and harder if you've not been following the script all the way through (and this one I confess I haven't) So, I'll leave the ending to Norman's Nemesis to those who've been putting the effort in.

I have been thinking we should do something to bring Corrido back. What do you think? He now knows Jesse's identity and that information could prove quite deadly. Perhaps he lies low and seeks out Jesse's family in the meantime. He finds Jesse's brother (down on his luck and getting into petty crime) and recruits him to his new gang, in order to take revenge on Street Hawk. Unfortunately, the brother doesn't know Street Hawk is infact Jesse.
When the two finally meet, it isn't a good reunion. The brother hated Jesse for being liked more as a child. The brother oversteps the mark. Jesse must fight between doing what is right and getting him off the streets and away from Corrido's influence. Could Street Hawk kill his own brother? Perhaps the brother is caught by the cops before Jesse can intercept, and is charged and imprisoned. Jesse goes to see him in jail, concerned about him but also concerned he may blow Jesse's secret identity.
Corrido puts a man inside the jail to kill the brother so he doesn't blag about him. It is up to Jesse to break his own brother out of jail before he is killed.

janice

Street Hawk Diostory Production Delays

Post by janice » Sat Feb 10, 2007 11:01 am

Scott, don't apologize. Life does get in the way of Street Hawk occasionally, LOL. Mine did recently while getting my mom's house on the market, and I have not been around as much. Good luck with your house hunt. I know the housing market in So Cal can be horrific. We are thinking of moving up, but cannot find what we are looking for here, so we are considering building (shudder). Again, good luck. I hope you find the right house for you and your family.

Dan, if you want to write your own story, go ahead. It would not hurt anyone's feeling here if you say "hands off". Your story idea is a good one.

hernesson

Street Hawk Diostory Production Delays

Post by hernesson » Sat Feb 10, 2007 12:34 pm

Thanks Janice. I just might play with my own story first on my wp and post it in its entirety when its done. That way I can always go back and change sections I don't like and people see just the final story as I meant it. I have to be in the right frame of mind to do it.
I was also thinking about doing a script as opposed a story, but my strength lies, I think, in being able to describe the action. I sometimes get stuck with dialogue.
I guess that's funny for a person who can't ever seem to shut up on this forum! LoL :-)

ducati749s

Street Hawk Diostory Production Delays

Post by ducati749s » Sat Feb 10, 2007 12:41 pm

Good luck with the house and do the project whenever you have time.

Better add my own excuse(Not about the replica-thats happening by Hook or by Crook)
A few months ago I posted that I was going to be doing a parody of SH with a scooter. Here is the scooter:
Image
(There it is beside my bike for proof)
I bought it extremely cheap, did a bit of research and then found out that it was rare and collectable, so that project is scrapped. I made an intro though, you can see that if you want.
I am going to restore the scoot, just dont tell the Harley boys that I have it, they will rip me apart.LoL

hernesson

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Post by hernesson » Sat Feb 10, 2007 12:43 pm

I'd like to see that ... :-)

ducati749s

Street Hawk Diostory Production Delays

Post by ducati749s » Sat Feb 10, 2007 1:01 pm

Here is a teaser for the(Never made) first episode(Intro soon):

http://s124.photobucket.com/albums/p21/ ... teaser.flv

Yes its bad, but I didnt have the scooter running then so no on the move shots.
The shaking motion was supposed to make the bike look like it was on the move but it didnt, it just looked stupid.

Start the slagging.

hernesson

Street Hawk Diostory Production Delays

Post by hernesson » Sat Feb 10, 2007 1:07 pm

LoL. That was perculiarly vague! [even has the raspy heavy breathing! You aren't a "stalker" in your spare time by any chance?????? :D]
This idea is really cool though. Really funny.

I'll look forward to seeing what you can do with it.

ducati749s

Street Hawk Diostory Production Delays

Post by ducati749s » Sat Feb 10, 2007 1:09 pm

LoL. That was perculiarly vague! [even has the raspy heavy breathing! You aren't a "stalker" in your spare time by any chance?????? :D]
This idea is really cool though. Really funny.

I'll look forward to seeing what you can do with it.
No I am not a stalker, anyhow, did you enjoy your Ice cream yesterday evening.LoL


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